TOEFL 2

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Q. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universitiesshould give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activitiesas they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your opinion.

Some people claim that universities should concentrate on academic research and study,therefore should not pay for something except academic affairs. But, I think this opinion overlooks some points. I try to explain one by one.
First, from the view of the whole society, it is recquirement from society that universities actively support students' sports activities. There are many successful players who graduate university in almost all sports. Now, univeresities are precious provider of good athletes. In addition, if they doesn't provide place for sports, students who have talent for some sports must decide thier direction, sport or academy when they graduate high school. But thanks to the support by universities, they can keep both of possibilities.
Second, I consider this problem on position of universities. If universities give much money to the sports activities, they may be able to make strong team of some sports. Then, the team will join famous game and adavertise the name of the university. As a result, they would can get more students.
In conclusion, I think universities should give as much money to thier students' sports activities asto thier university libraries.